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Old 09-26-2006, 09:51 PM
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Meanwhile, Nancy was growing restless. Bess had been escorted out of the room thirty minutes ago and Nancy had no idea what was going on. That's what scared her the most. She should be out there helping her friend, but instead, she was stuck in this room and her only company was the big buffoon that was sitting in front of the door.

"So...how's it going?" Nancy asked, trying to get the man to talk to her. But he remained silent.

"What are they doing with Bess?" she asked. The man just glared at her.

"Are you going to say anything to me?" she asked.

"Yeah," the man said.

Nancy looked at him expectantly.

"Sit down and shut up."

Nancy sighed, but she did as she was told. This is going to be a lot harder than I thought...
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Old 09-28-2006, 11:01 PM
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Bess didn't understand what was going on. Why had they taken her away...what were they going to do to her? One of the men handed Bess a dress.

"Here, change into this."

"Wh-why?"

"Just do it...or I'll be forced to hurt your friend."

Swallowing back her fear, Bess took the dress, the man smiled as he left the room.
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Old 10-03-2006, 02:23 AM
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Bess looked at the dress and shook her head. It was the thrid one they'd asked her to change into now. Each time one of the men brought one, the instruction to put it on was also accompanied by the vague threat that they would harm Nancy.

Each time she put one on, they snapped a quick picture of her with a digital camera.

"I wonder what that's all about," Bess thought to herself as she shrugged off the fancy dress she was currently wearing, and slipped into the newest one.

She also hoped her captors were living up to their end of the bargain of not harming Nancy, since she was living up to hers.
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Old 10-05-2006, 01:39 AM
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"Here," one of them tossed another dress at her. "Try this one."

"No, wait! That won't work, Dave," said one of the others. "The rich brat got rid of one like that two months ago - so she," he indicated Bess, "can't be seen in it."
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Old 10-05-2006, 10:09 PM
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Bess was very curious now, that was a strange comment that goon had said. Was she taken because she resembled another girl? Bess couldn't wait to tell Nancy! That is if Nancy were still alive!
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Old 10-28-2006, 04:20 PM
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Meanwhile, Ned, and George were riding in the back of a River Heights police car. Their new acquaintance, who'd indentified herself as Molly Blake, was in front, offering directions to the officer who was driving.
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Old 11-09-2006, 10:55 PM
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George leaned close to Ned, speaking in low voice: "Do you think we can trust her?"

"I don't know....I don't think we have a choice! So far she's our only link to Nancy!"

"I guess you're right but I'm keeping a close eye on her!" declared George.
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Old 12-03-2006, 11:49 PM
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They were interrupted by an announcement from Molly.

"We're close."
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Old 03-05-2007, 12:23 AM
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Chief McGinnis slowed the squad car and got on the radio to call for back-up.

"I have no idea what we'll be dealing with in there," he said, turning to face the trio of young faces in the backseat. "I don't suppose it'll do any good, but I'm going to ask you all to please stay in the car and let me and my people handle this."
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Old 03-05-2007, 12:40 AM
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"Sorry, Chief," Ned said as he and George piled out of the car. "But we're going to help Nancy. Molly?" he asked, turning to the other girl.

She shook her head. "I'm staying," she said softly.
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Old 03-05-2007, 12:51 AM
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Chief McGinnis realized fighting with Nancy's friends would be futile.

"You can stick around, but you will stay out of our way. I won't stand for civillians getting hurt on my watch. Understood?"

Ned and Geroge nodded their heads solemnly.

"I'm afraid I'm actually going to need your help, Molly. You'll need to be as specific as you can about the location you were being held."

Molly looked stricken. "I -I don't think I can...everything is starting to all look the same..."
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"Is there anything about any of the buildings that sticks out? A certain window? Or a doorway?"

Milly shook her head. "I...I can only remember that this is the right area...that the building was either on this street, or..." She stopped short. She'd been gazing around with a look of anxiety and confusion on her face, but now her expression changed.
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Old 08-19-2007, 10:36 PM
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Molly's face was nothing short of pure horror. She started to sway slightly and Chief McGinnis and Ned darted forward to keep her from falling to the ground.

"What is it, Molly? What do you see?" the chief asked.

Maggie pointed a shaky finger towards a brown brick building that was slightly hidden in shadow. "That's the place...that's where I was taken!"
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"What are we waiting for?! Let's go check it out!" cried George already walking towards the building.

"Now hold on there! First of all I need to get a warrent!" Chief McGinnis said.

"But that'll take too long!" George looked like she might cry.

"I'm sorry George, but I have to uphold the law. Besides, I have a few friends in high places...it won't take too long." George and Ned were both shocked when the Chief of Police gave them a little wink.
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"Really?" George said as the Chief walked away to make the calls. "We could just do it without waiting for him."

Molly and Ned glanced at her.

"Are you off your trolley?" Ned asked, looking at her like she'd gone insane.
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George merely stared at him, her gaze level and unwavering. Ned sighed.

"All right, George, have it your way. Let's go."
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They approached the building cautiously, careful not to step on any twigs and creeping along the brick walls as if detaching from the structure would create noise. Ned was the first one to reach the deeply pitted metal door and he slowly, softly, laid his right hand on the tarnished door handle before experimenting with a light tug. The door did not give.

"It must be locked," George whispered in Ned's ear. Ned nodded and pulled a little harder. Still nothing happened. He turned his head to hiss, "I think now would be a good time to wait from Chief McGinnis and his back-up, don't you?"

Before George could reply there was a strange squeaking sound from the other side of the door. Ned barely managed to snatch his hand away and flatten back against the wall before the door burst open and swung towards his face!
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